I think one thing you could definitely improve is the writing bit. It doesnt blend with the rest. Maybe a different font, maybe instead of writin it on top of everything (foreground) maybe u shoud give it some depth.
I reckon it should be part of the environment, like a banner or somthn. If you can't be bothered with all that, I still think putting it behind the chains would look cooler.

Well, get your imagination goin!
L8ers