Well I got a new PDF reader and sat down for a long time. This was an extremely good read, and I hope issues continue to be made. What was mentioned about the commercial aspect of creating games was useful, but I had already read something quite similar to it in the past so it was nothing new. (If I ever create games for money, it'll be a small shareware game not going through any publisher)

I'm not sure how many people went into the making of this, but there should be some more editing . Simple mistakes like misspelled words (Ex: "llowed" missing an "a"; "independant" instead of "independent"), "it's" used for possession, not much else.