In response to Jeremy's feedback, I've re-read the design documents that were submitted and tried to provide some more detailed feedback. Most of my comments relate to genre choices and the level of detail in the document. Comments are listed under team names. Genres are listed. If a genre is in italic there is a specific concern/thought I have about it.

Where I've commented about genres, if I've based my comments on these definitions which were used to construct the genre list for the competition, the competition genre list and a whole lot of thinking.

2nd Moon
Genres : Action (Red)/Strategy (Green)
You've acknowledged in your document that you've left a lot out because you were short on time, but the key elements (including an overview of gameplay) are there, along with some hints about the finer points of battles when you go on the offensive (vehicular differences), but one thing that is missing is what happens when your opponents go on the offensive and attack your cities. I'm guessing that this is where the strategy aspect of the game really kicks in with regards to planning defences etc. Overall though, you seem to have a clear idea of what you're trying to achieve.

3F
Genres : Action (Red)/Building and Management (Cyan)
Quite a lots of thought gone into this. The action part sounds like some classic Atari 8-bit games 'Sea Dragon' and 'Nautilus', they were both great fun so I'm quite looking forward to playing the game. My only concern comes from your comments about the operation of the port aspect of the game. My take on it is that building and management implies you have full control over the choices (within boundaries governed by say available technology), but part of your document makes it sound like the port will be a guided set of choices that you must work through to open up new action levels. If it is guided and there is a strict order in which things occur then I would question whether its a multigenre title (For example, if action level 1 opens option A in the port... option A opens action level 2 and so on) because actually, you as the player have no choice at all in that case. Also, based on the genre definition of 'City Building', there is a certain implication that your choices have implications for your 'citizens' which in-turn has an impact on the game.

Alia
Genres : Educational (Grey)/Artillery (White)/Turnbased Combat (Red)
This is one of the most complete documents I've read and its nice to see someone specifically targetting the NDS. Unfortunately, whilst there is a wealth of information in it, I found the document a little tricky to follow in places. One such place is the exaplanation of the artillery aspect hence my concern about that genre. As I said, this is one of the most complete documents and its clear theres a hell of a lot of thought gone into it, so please don't take this the wrong way... sometimes quality is better than quantity. Some parts of it could have been sacrified for a clearer explanation of some of the game mechanics.

Average Idiot
Genres : Puzzle (Grey)/Strategy (Green)/Action (Red)
First off, the puzzle genre. If all you do is manipulate the playing field, then that does not qualify as a puzzle. Strategy/Tactical move yes... puzzle no. This issue aside though, its nice concise overview of the game. The only thing its really lacking is what constitutes a win (or loss) and how the game progresses.

Batlogic
Genres : Traditional (Grey)/Adventure (Blue)/Action (Red)/Puzzle (Grey)/Role-Playing (Red)/Simulation (Cyan)
My first thought... genre overload. On the whole, the document is pretty good and its clear you have a detailed idea of what you want to achieve and how the various aspects of the game tie up. But, I would question the genre list. The phrase 'less is more' springs to mind especially as each additional genre colour above the minimum requirement of 2 only accounts for a 5 point bonus.The issues as I see them with the genres you've listed are as follows.

Adventure implies two things puzzle solving since it is one of the key aspects of adventure games and certain characteristic game mechanics (such as a point and click control, e.g. Myst). So with regards to the puzzle genre, unless there are puzzle minigames, the puzzle genre won't (IMHO) count. Also, based on how you describe your game, it doesn't have the limited set of choices or point and click interface of an adventure, so it would (IMHO) more accurately be described as an action adventure.
The roleplaying genre implies certain game mechanics... characters stats for example. There is no mention of character stats with the exception of reputation in the document, so whilst you take on the 'role' of this bounty hunter/mercenary, I would question whether that is sufficient to qualify as a roleplaying game.

So in short, I personally would describe the core mechanics of your game as 'Action-adventure' and 'Simulation' (2 genre colours). Traditional and Puzzle minigames would add a third genre colour. But my main concern is that if you try and implement too much, the rest of the game could suffer and you could lose far more than you gain.

berezuev
You scored 0 because you didn't upload a design document, thats all I can say.

burdija.com
Genres : Adventure (Blue)/Action - Vehicular Combat (Red)/Economic Simulation (Cyan)
I can't comment too much on the document because for the most part its not English and unfortunately my Spanish is non-existent. But, I would question the genres. The economic simulation I can see, with the trading aspect thats mentioned, whether it qualifies I guess will depend on how good a market simulation it is. My concern comes from the Adventure and Action - Vehicular Combat genres. As mentioned above, Adventure implies a certain set of game mechanics, so I would suggest that actually your game fits into the 'Action Adventure' (red) and 'Space Simulation' (cyan) genre, which of course means you only have 2 genre colours. But overall, I like the sound of the game.

CairnsGames
Genres : Puzzle (Grey)/Real Time Strategy (Green)
Another good design document. The genre choices are clear as are the explanations of the game and its mechanics. Great job so far.

CDB
Genres : Artillery (White)/Strategy (Green)
This sounds to me like its going to be a nice twist on the turn based strategy. The document provides enough information to get a good idea of the game and how its played and I have no concerns about your genre choices. Great job.

Cerebral Bicycle Company
Genres : Puzzle (Grey)/Platform (Purple)
Overall, a good document with some clear explanations of the game and its mechanics. I like the twist on Tetris and I like the live action sprites idea, but I have concerns about the platform genre. At its most basic level, yes the player sprite may be required to climb on top of the tetris blocks and run around to avoid being squished (I hope you don't plan on dropping a block on your live action stunt actor btw) but is that sufficient to fit into the platform genre or is it simply a twist on Tetris?

Eon Clash
Genres : Maze (Black)/Puzzle (Grey)/Strategy (Green)
Another great design document. I personally don't have a problem with the inclusion of the strategy genre from reading the description of combat. The other two are quite clear cut. All in all, great job.

Eric
Genres : Action (Red)/Strategy (Green)/Simulation (Cyan)
The document provides an overview, but doesn't discuss the details of the game mechanics as a result I can see the action and strategy parts but I'm iffy on the simulation aspect. Whether or not this is a valid genre will largely depend on the final game I guess and how good the in-vehicle aspects are. But even if its discounted, you've met the required 2. Overall though, looks to me like it could be quite a nice game when its done.

Fedex
Genres : Action (Red)/Strategy (Green)
The document is fairly short, and as you acknowledge, its not the best translation, but despite that it does give a basic overview. This makes the action part clear, but doesn't go into too much detail about the strategy part. A little more detail about the mechanics of what goes on on the surface of the planet would have been good. Whether strategy qualifies will depend on those mechanics.

Gelu
Genres : Mecha (Red)/Military (Cyan)/Artillery (White)
As I said in my original comments, you did the absolute minimum. There is no real design in the document, just the list of genres, platforms and title. It would have been nice to get an idea of how you planned to put these together, but as it is, only time will tell if you manage to pull off the genres you've stated.

Grudzio
Genres : Stealth (Red)/Puzzle (Grey)
Nicely presented document with a pretty good explanation of the game and how the chosen genres will work together. Nice job.

Heuhnerschaender
Genres : Puzzle (Grey)/Artillery (White)
Nice clean concise document that gives a good idea of the game. The puzzle genre... whether this is a valid genre I think depends on implementation, although I honestly can't think of where I would put that aspect of the game in the genre list if it wasn't classified as a puzzle. That concern aside though, sounds like it could be great fun.

Infinite Space Online
Genres : Puzzle (Grey)/Shooter (Red)
Nice clean document that provides a good overview of the game. The idea is great, and compared to all the other entries, it has that nice twist, where you aren't actually trying to integrate the genres into a single game as such... instead the different genres become neat self contained components in a bigger picture. I have to ask... will you be going for a clean sweep of the genre colour chart?

Marek Mauder
Genres : Role-Playing (Red)/Strategy (Green)
Great document and clearly defined genres. I can't say much more than that as you seem to have it pretty much worked out.

MechaChess
Genres : Action (Red)/Chess (Grey)/Simulation (Cyan)
Whilst the document is a little on the short side, it does provide quite a clear overview of the game. Its not the most original concept (Archon and Battlechess spring to mind), but none the less, it should be fun to play (I might actually stand a chance at beating people at chess). My only concern is the simulation genre. Whilst the genre list is open to interpretation, Mechs are listed specifically as Action and there is no mention of them in the competition or Wikipedia genre lists relating to simulation. The only mention that I could find was in Vehicular combat. Assuming simulation is acceptable as a genre, then my concern would be will the mech be realistic enough to qualify? You will achieve the minimum requirement with the Action and Chess genre, so is the added work of making a realistic mech simulation worth 5 points?

Mindnever
Genres : Arcade Flight Simulator (?)/Racing (Yellow)/Puzzle (Grey)
Whilst the document provides the basics, its not totally clear and so interpreting the Arcade Flight Simulator genre thats suggested is a little tricky. First off I think the words Arcade and Simulator (based on the Wikipedia genres) are mutually exclusive when it comes to in-game flight. Action or shoot-em-up would possibly be an acceptable genre, or possibly even space simulator, but it will all depend on the implementation within the game. Overall though, it does sound like it could be quite a fun game.

Mirage
Genres : Run and Gun (Red)/Economic Simulation (Cyan)
Nice clean document, if a little on the short side. Unfortunately, theres not much about the game mechanics so judging whether the run and gun genre is accurate isn't very easy at this stage. You've stated that the other genre is economic simulation... if all you can do is sell stuff you find to buy other items, in my opinion thats not in-depth enough to qualify as an economic simulation. So you need to give this some thought.

NecroSoft
Genres : Racing (Yellow)/Simulation (Cyan)/Action (Red)
My first concern is your stated platform support. Whilst Windows XP is largely the same as Win2K, it does provide some features that Win2K does not. The document is a little short on details, but it does give a fairly clear idea of the game and from that I think the racing and action genres are fine. But, the simulation genre is a bit iffy. Will it be realistic enough to be classed as a simulation?

Patator
Genres : Simulation (Cyan)/Breakout (?)/Maze (Black)
The document is a little short on details, but there is enough to get an idea, although I'm not totally clear on finer points of the maze part, but this is in my opinion, the only clear genre. The simulation genre... reading the document, I would says its strategy not simulation. So thats your two genres. Why only two? Because at this point, I can't decide where the breakout component fits in the genre colour table. I would classify it as an arcade game, but there is no arcade genre (I think it was removed because it was too broad)... as such, I can't find a genre in the list that could be used to classify breakout, except maybe Action. This is largely irrelevant though because at the very minimum you have two genres.

Project Miniverse
Genres : Space Simulation (Cyan)/FPS (Red)
Overall, its a nice clean, concise document that provides a nice rounded overview of the game and its mechanics. The genre choices seem accurate based on the documents descriptions of the game, so there's not a lot more I can add.

pstudio
Genres : Strategy (Green)/Lightgun (Money green)
Clean and clear document that gives a fairly concise picture of the game. Unfortunately its a little lacking when it comes to details (as an example, heres a couple of points that left me wondering... how the lightgun element is going to be implemented and how you will gain a tactical advantage in the strategy element). This lack of detail has left me wondering about the genre choices, whether they are appropriate, so I'll have to wait and see when I get my hands on the game itself.

ShootingStar
Genres : Shooter (Red)/Puzzle (Grey)
First off, the document is clean and concise but its a little lacking in details. With regards to your genre choice, I have to ask the question why do you feel it should be classed as a Puzzle Shooter and not say an action adventure or even a platformer like Tomb Raider. Action adventures involve puzzles and possibly shooting (or other methods of despatching) enemies, as does Tomb Raider. And I ask, because I personally would classify your entry (having re-read it) as an action adventure which means it fits only a single genre.

Teleport Media
Genres : Run and Gun (Red)/Puzzle (Grey)
Overall, this is a nice clean document. It provides quite a bit of information although theres not too much about the run and gun element and its tie in with the puzzle element, hence I've marked a concern against the run and gun genre. I'm guessing that the puzzles sit between sections of run and gun action. None the less, I quite like the sound of it.

Traveler
Genres : Platform (Purple)/Strategy (Green)
Nice clear document, with details where needed to explain the mechanics of the game. Your genre choices are pretty clear and theres clearly quite a lot of thought gone into it already. Nice job.

Conclusions
These are my thoughts and comments after reading your documents for a second time. I've been pretty brutal in some cases with my interpretation of the genre choices. The decisions I've made about what I believe qualifies and what does not have been based on the Wikipedia genre list and a lot of thought. I mentioned when I originally posted in the competition thread that some entries got me thinking about the genre choices... now on my second reading, I've found more entries that I have possible issues with. Ultimately though, these concerns may not be relevant... it all depends on how your games pan out over the course of the competition.

The adventure genre - Several teams have specified this as a genre, but in my opinion, adventure implies certain game mechanices.... text based command interface, point and click... but a common theme is actually quite a limited number of choices... go north, go south, go east, pickup key, etc. In my opinion, none of the teams has submitted a design that includes Adventure as a valid genre. Action-adventure, yes, but adventure no.

The simulation genre - This is a toughie, because simulation implies just that.... a realistic simulation. The one exception is that of the space simulator (Freelancer for example), which based on the Wikipedia article shouldn't really be considered a simulator since in alot of cases they throw away (or disregard larges parts of) the rule book regarding realism. However, for the purposes of this competition, space simulators are classed in the Simulation genre and so are acceptable. But for other subgenres, a certain level of realism should be present in order to cross the boundary from say action (in the case of a mech or vehicular combat) to true simulator.

Less is more - There are only 5 bonus points for each additional genre colour that you implement over and above the requirement of 2. If you implement 5 extra genre colours badly, you'll get 25 bonus points, but you could well lose more than that because the graphics, sound etc. suffer. So please bear this in mind.

Template documents - Jeremy was kind enough to provide a template for other teams to use and whilst its a good document template, it would have been better if those teams that used it could have removed the sections that weren't filled in or relevant. I found myself wading through quite a lot of text that wasn't relevant/completed. I understand that you probably didn't want to remove the sections so that you could fill them in later, but you could have used 'Save as...'. Load the newly saved document, remove the excess, and then submit that. The more detail the better in these documents, but conversely, the more wasted space we have to trawl through as judges, the longer the scoring process will take.

Platform support - Unfortunately I didn't take too much notice of platform specifics (I only checked that they were listed) until I read NecroSoft's, which got me thinking. They were quite explicit stating that their engine correctly works with Windows XP.... what about Windows 2000 I thought. A requirement of the competition is that your entries must run on the judges hardware and some of you have some pretty high end machines. I have Windows 98 SE and Windows 2000 Server available on an Athlon 800 and Windows 2000 Server available on a Duron 1.3GHz. Nothing else, so if you make use of XP only facilities and your entry won't run on my machine, it will be 0 points from me here on in. And high end these machines are not. Several teams have mentioned Newton... I can categorically tell you that if you rely heavily on Newton (or more generally extensive physics) you game could be unplayable for me.

Documents - Overall, I thought the quality of the documents was pretty good. I realise that all you had to provide to get the points was a working title, the two genre minimum and your platform support plans, but one thing the competition trys to encourage is good development practices. Whilst I was able to get a general idea about the game for every entry (with two notable exceptions), some were much clearer than others, especially when it came to defining the finer points of the game mechanics and their use of the different genres. The documents that were really good also stick out in my mind because they gave me more information and consequently a better idea of the game.

And finally...
If you feel I've been unjust with my comments about genres, then lets discuss it. But if we can't decide (or you can't convince me), WILL and Savage can have the final word since they are in charge of the competition. So if we can't reach a satisfactory conclusion, we can ask them to make the final decision.

Overall though, I stand by my original assessment of the competition so far. All the entries (with the exception of two teams) sound like they could make great games, so nice work and good luck to all of you. I hope you all hit the stage 2 requirements on-time as I'm looking forward to playing all your games :-)